Monday, November 21, 2016

TS - The French Revolution's Impact on the Haitian Revolution

The French Revolution caused many political and social changes that impacted the Haitian Revolution.

2 comments:

  1. This thesis statement is very specific. Keegan did an excellent job of discussing the 3 major topics he will focus on in his paper, and he presented an argument. The only suggestions I have would be to narrow your topic down slightly and maybe only focus on one or two of the changes not all three because that would require a lot of time and possibly a paper longer than 6 pages. However, I do think your thesis statement is excellent, and it sets up you paper.

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  2. As Sarah suggests, you will need to focus your thesis to specific economic, political, and/or social changes that led to the Haitian Revolution. Since you are limited to 4-6 pages, you may need to develop only one or two areas from the French Revolution to thoroughly demonstrate how these led to the revolution in the Caribbean.

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