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Tuesday, November 8, 2016
RQ - Migration's effect on ISIS and Syria
Consider "The Rise of ISIS" in the context of "International Migration." Is the mass flight of civilians helping ISIS consolidate its hold over Syria?
This is a very well and thought out question. It is not too broad or specific which is very good. My only advice would be to slightly alter the first sentence because if someone were too read your essay with prior no knowledge of this class they wouldn't know where the context of "International Migration" is coming from.
This is a very well and thought out question. It is not too broad or specific which is very good. My only advice would be to slightly alter the first sentence because if someone were too read your essay with prior no knowledge of this class they wouldn't know where the context of "International Migration" is coming from.
ReplyDeleteAs Melina suggested, wrap the first statement into your question.
ReplyDeleteIs the mass migration of people from Syria helping ISIS consolidate its hold over Syria?
ReplyDeleteIs the mass migration of people from the Middle East helping ISIS consolidate its hold over the Middle East?
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