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Monday, November 21, 2016
TS- Origin and Stance of the Kurds
The position of the Kurds is greatly influenced by the geo-political and socioeconomic factors in Iraq, Syria, Iran, and Turkey.
I think the main idea of the thesis is good, however I would personally put the influences at the beginning of the sentence, and add a bit more information about your argument, maybe add some adjectives in front of the words, "position", "geo-political", and "socio-economic" to make it more specific.
You are on the right track. However, as Megan points out, it will be helpful to focus your thesis by identifying what you mean by "position" and selecting specific geo-political and socio-economic factors in your argument.
I think the main idea of the thesis is good, however I would personally put the influences at the beginning of the sentence, and add a bit more information about your argument, maybe add some adjectives in front of the words, "position", "geo-political", and "socio-economic" to make it more specific.
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You are on the right track. However, as Megan points out, it will be helpful to focus your thesis by identifying what you mean by "position" and selecting specific geo-political and socio-economic factors in your argument.
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